All Comments on 'Camp Fun'

I REALLY think I went to the wrong Camps....

Took you a while to get to the point, but finally I reallly liked it!! :D

that was a great story keep them cuming!

I spent 13 years as a girl scout and the last 3 years were the best. THIS is why I begged to go to camp every summer. Ask my gf how much it helped. ;) I LOVED IT!

Some people just seem to have all the luck

Not bad, but the grammar could be better. You have too many commas. The dialog is unrealistic as well. Particularly in the beginning.

Lots of stories like this around, not new but graphicly fairly well put together

I like your story. I hope that you write more good ones. After reading this, I wish I was a woman and could feel all that pleasure.

She has a mouth not a month. Also people shudder with excitement not shutter

Very sexy indeed