All Comments on 'Camp of Blessing Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I like your Story so far, but please stop focusing on growing dicks and balls or your story quickly slips into ridicioulessness. Focus more on Character evolving of kris and how she learn to control her new power and how to use it .

KristannaKristannaover 5 years agoAuthor

My story is rather ridiculous though, it's fantasy, it's not supposed to be realistic at all.

There will be character development, power growth and control. There will also be growing dicks, balls and transformation, that's one of my favorite fetishes. I understand if you don't like it, but it is what it is :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent story

This hits a lot of kinks and it's a great story so far. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

Actually it is interesting, good balance of plot and sex scenes. Please proceed! 😃

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