by flyingbluejay
Magical. You have a gift for story telling that is sublime. A perfect start to my day. Five stars.
Very nice. That face sitting scene was hot! But now we have complications — things were going a little too smoothly, weren’t they?
Five stars again! As I've said before, your story telling is fantastic. Your descriptions use multiple senses and the action is so compelling. Then the twist with the adventurous campers, that is, by the way, so typical of campers in any kind of camp. Thanks for another wonderful chapter; I can't wait to see how this is resolved.
By the way, a mainstream fiction writer that reminds me of you is Deanna Raybourn's Veronica Speedwell series.
The ENTIRE completed Camp Sutton series is now available on any device through the link on my page. All chapters will be released on here eventually, but any support over there means the world!