All Comments on 'Campground Discoveries Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I luv to cum kiss too !

TN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please let there be more. These two are so hot together. Love that they are so drawn to each other that they jerk each other, kiss, frot, swap blowjobs, eat cum…. Now we need them flip fuck each other in the next chapter please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You're already my favorite author.

🤭😋🥰

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

Sure seems like Danny is trying to tell Gil something. Hope this continues after the campground!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WOW, WOW, WOW!!! I said this was a beautifully written story before. Now I'm trying to think of a better word than that. I've got to tell you; this took me back a hundred years ago to when I had my first gay experience. You've captured every emotion and feeling with your words. I'm sure their exploration isn't over yet, especially since Danny has now discovered the motion of the ocean with his hips. And I'm still wondering if something will happen between Gil and the shower guy once Danny leaves for Albuquerque. Can hardly wait to read part 4 as this has shot way past ***** now. Thanks, MLF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story is so beautiful, so hot, I have reread it with each new chapter and have cum powerfully each time with very little effort. I love your stories. Thank you.

RobJasperRobJasperabout 2 years ago

This story just keeps getting better and better - terrific! Appreciate the detailed descriptions of Danny & Gil as well as their lovemaking. Ten stars!

BiParkerGuyBiParkerGuyabout 2 years ago

Pretty damn hot story. Very nicely written. Good job.

Bicreampieguy71Bicreampieguy71about 2 years ago

I am loving these stories. I can’t wait to read more. Wonder if my best friend wants to go camping 😏

Bicreampieguy71Bicreampieguy71about 2 years ago

I am loving these stories. I can’t wait to read more. Wonder if my best friend wants to go camping

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Liked the splash of chest hair on Gil's chest! I'm sure Danny's licking that chest felt good for Gil!

PabloPaco2022PabloPaco2022over 1 year ago

The finest and most tantalizing sex act of all .............. THE BJ .......... and ending with the most orgasmic of all orgasms ........... CIM. So erotically described with every detail so masterfully presented for our enjoyment .

luvtodoitluvtodoit6 months ago

Very sexy story, thanks. Brought back fond memories of when I became a cocksucker!

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