All Comments on 'Camping'

Your imagery is beautiful, but it seems like English may nor be your first language, so it's stilted and difficult to follow. An editor would be a great help to you.

I love your poetic language and have no doubt about your command of English. I like that you take risks with the way you use language and create space for imagination

Very Dylan Thomas. Congratulations

the poetry of the loving travels as the tongue travels, tasting and telling

thank you for writing beyond and within the narrative