All Comments on 'Camping Ch. 05'

by Rinmer-Dalle

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BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 10 years ago
I JUST WONDER HOW THE BROTHER GOT AWAY WITH IT.

Sorry for all the caps, I was just too lazy to redo it. I am sure that there was blood evidence, killing someone by beating them with a crowbar is pretty bloody and the brother does not seem to be the brightest candle and with him violating the restraining orders several times he would have to be the main suspect. However, for the flow of the story I will just let it go but it still disturbs me to an extent. Thank you for writing. I hope they make him suffer when they bring him to justice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

That was an ending I did not see coming. I got somewhat confused at the ending but got it figured out. Great story. I am waiting for the revenge.

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