All Comments on 'Camping Trip Ch. 01-02'

by Chewiebon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Improvements

Disable your spell check and get an editor.

lenalovesfunlenalovesfunalmost 7 years ago

Good story but there were a lot of errors. Can't wait to see where it goes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Totally love this!!!

Please please keep writing this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Love your writing!

Please keep writing, and grab an editor to catch the easy typos.

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