All Comments on 'Can I Validate My Hall Pass? Pt. 03'

What Kykidd87 said!

Unusual stories. So fun!

Very rarely do I get an erection from reading a story on Literotica LW section, but this was one of those rare exceptions. I read a good deal of the story with my cock hard, and me wanting to cum.

A really erotic interesting story. My only objection is that its too short. I don’t know if you’re planing to continue with more of it, but I think you have a great basis for a really GREAT saga. I’m sitting here waiting for you to write further chapters. Very good character development for starters. However, in my opinion you could, at the very least, double the story in size.

Very well done

Ronny is a very smart woman. Knows men quite well

Although I like this writer to a degree, stories that are almost all sex descriptions spoil the overall story. Sorry only 3 stars for this one. Mel B known as Hornydevil47