All Comments on 'Canada Days: He Comes When She Calls'

"... a niagra (sic) of sex in a duet of moans and tears."

Absolutely magnificent!

You already know you have to finish what you start. I'll help you with an idea or two. First, the wife doesn't come back in a week, it's three, and she looks like hell. After he calls her sister to come help take care of her, she admits to hubby she's been gangbanged by four guys for about two and a half weeks, constantly, day and night, and was know doubt pregnant. They didn't even give her time to take her pill. When the SiL arrives, she makes it pretty clear that hubby is now hers, and sister can leave to try and figure out whose baby it is, because she was taking over as hubby's wife. By the way, she might then announce that she is also PG, but she knows who did it. She did tell him she was on the pill, she just forgot to tell him she had not taken it for a week before she fucked him, over and over. Now you decide whether he keeps one of them. Or both or leaves them both. Good grammar and editing.. Keep writing

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