All Comments on 'Candalyn'

Thank you. This is a great gradual mutual seduction story.

Both Trent and Candalyn clearly wan each other,. The way Candalyn took the leadi s great.

Yur story brings back pleasant memories of a cute colleague who I liked immensely and who in turn had a crush on me.

Like Candalyn,my fried knew just how to increase both the temperature and the intensity just one degree at a time.

Your story deserves a 6 out of 5.

I look forward to your future efforts.