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- Canvas Of Desire
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Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThe word literary in place of literally is comical. That was one of a few misspellings.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoPlease, please, please write in one tense and get an editor/proofreader to help you. This was an interesting story ruined by too many grammatical errors, typos and misspellings.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWhat a wonderful story, a follow up would be welcomed. A long romantic affair, with lots of love & sex.
