All Comments on 'Captain Blake on Slave Planet X Ch. 02'

Congrats! This is Very nice twist! Hope You will write more;)

Very nice. Hope you do continue this story!!!👏👏👏

PLEASE continue this story. It is a cut above. The sex scene at the end of part 1 was way hot, and the psychology and politics are phenomenal. Character development is underway and there is a broad future for development. I want to pick your brain as you play out this scene . You have a rare talent. Use it.

a few minor criticisms: the odd typo and at times it isn't clear which character is speaking/thinking. .Minor caveats, but annoying as the reader is diverted from the excellent flow of your prose.

Love the tale this far. Old Fart William

This is the second story i've read from you and once again, 5/5. Beautiful. I sort of saw where this was going and loved it. Please continue this story, it has so much potential!

Accidentally read this story for a second time just now. It’s really good. Please add to it, at least a little. Thanks