by Vector900
The space pirates, electronic slave collar & forced oral are all pretty standard & were competently done. What I liked most was that Killian showed a bit of restraint & even tenderness towards Emrah, which is different & again helps set the stage for what's to come. Good job.
Regardless of the sensation from the collar she would still be trying to fight it, you made her submit a bit too fast. Just a thought.
I though it was an interesting choice to put her at 39/40 not that middle aged is a bad option obvs. Lol, I know I look at sexy guys and think “no” if they’re late teens/ early twenties, no idea if that’s a me problem or a generic/ common middle aged female opinion. I suppose it would only be her rank that would make him prefer her over Talia, as from what I can tell most men don’t seem to have the same opinion of “a bit too young” ?? Naturally the vast majority of well everyone see underage as waaaay too young.
Tess (uk)