All Comments on 'Captain's Woes Ch. 04'

lets see, Dan fucks, teach gets orgams 1, 2, flipps into butt, orgasm 3, 4 - and THEN he puts the torn panties into mouth to stop her screams for orgam 5 & 6?!? a bit late, a bit sloppy.

teachers and janitors are running down the hall to the classroom....

i realize this is a fantasy, but....that is savage. fucking her in her dry butt, without lube (not even spit!), with a oversized cock - no prep at all! - that is sloppy writing too! prep could be a few fingers up the butt with girlcum for lube - but you couldn't spend time to write that?

...and, on the subject of sloppy writing, there is a considerable difference in meaning between 'diffusing' (para 9 of this chapter) and 'defusing'.