All Comments on 'Captive'

Good story, but a few loose ends. I liked that you got right into it, but I found myself wondering why he was left outside her door and who the guys were who ran away?

Why did he feel like he "had to comply"? It has the tone of a non-consent story, but he was easy to do her bidding. Also, it wasn't very clear what the positions were she was putting him in. The spanking and anal play was very well described and hot. I would like more of this, maybe from his POV.

Thanks for the note! IIRC I wrote this after getting feedback on another story that I had too much wordy backstory, so I intentionally jumped into the action here for a change of pace. And the ambiguity was part of the allure of it for me, leaving unspecified what he did, why was she selected for this job, was she new at it, etc. In an earlier draft where he had to be whipped into submission I got the feedback of feeling too sorry for him so I lessened it--it sounds like you would want even more punishment! ;)

I got very wet while reading this amazing story and i came three times while rubbing my juice clit with two fingers. I need more of this