All Comments on 'Captive'

Someone "had a horse cock transplanted onto his balls" in this story? This was a five star story until that part.

From the pov of the woman and all that was done was so hot it was on fire. Oh, the horse cock thing was a bit out there but the rest of the sensations, the anticipation of what could happen, the whole release of self, the exposure, degradation of the woman was written very creatively. If you could have explained a bit more at the beginning of just what she expected from her partner, the story seemed to jump immediately to her waking up. I would have liked to find out what else happened to her until maybe having her wake up in her bed a few days later. Your expressive writing can come up with a lot of "activities" that happened to her over the next few days. I await more chapters, please. Your style of writing and expression are highly prized and very few writers achieve it.