All Comments on 'Captive Princess Pt. 02'

by Wifetheif

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
From_One_to_AnotherFrom_One_to_Anotherover 10 years ago
Very Good!!

Great story! I'm liking the plot so far. I thought the length of the chapter was just fine! Hope to hear more from you:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Superb story, but like the others, felt this chapter was a bit short. But if you leave the readers wanting more, you have written a good story- and you have done. Looking forward to reading more.

MaynessMaynessover 10 years ago

Would have liked a longer chapter but am very interested to see where up you take this. Pretty horrific start for the slaves so far!

Phil_PatsfanPhil_Patsfanover 10 years ago
Very good so far

Just a a little too short. I guess there won't be any ransom or rescue.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous