All Comments on 'Capture the Flag'

me too! it just stops without saying what happened which is annoying because it's actually a really good story. you're a great writer but can you please finish the story?

I want to know what happens next!!!

but where's the rest?

I want more.

Gimme more.

Right now!

Sigh. Let me know through the feedback system when the next chapter is up. Please?

O, posted in 06, i guess it won't come up :(

More more! It's just starting to get to the really good parts...love the lead up, and your descriptiveness.

...the rest of the story? You didn't really mean to end it like that, did you? I was just getting interested. And where's the promised kidnap? What a tease!