by wanting2bfreed
So many mistakes it’s impossible to list them all and the worst written story I’ve ever read. 🙄 But weirdly enjoyable. 😳. It’s such a pity because the storyline itself is good 👍 and without all the mistakes it would have been a five.
Waist not waste.
Try to learn to spell before writing any more crap.
Please tell me your working on a part 2. Love the story and can’t wait to read more.