All Comments on 'Captured Ch. 01'

So when will we see the next chapter?

Wow! What a great start! I can't wait to read more!

the chapter was amazing.. i hope i get to read the next chapter real soon! great work !

Well fleshed out characters, a wonderful story line, and some hot and steamy parts as well. Please write the continuation.

I am impressed. Great start. I can't wait to read more. You have done a wonderful job with chapter one...when can I read two?

A good treatment of the traditional fantasy. The only thing that bugged me was the name "Carly," which seemed so out of place among the others -- all of which had an old-fashioned sound.

I love the pirate stories! Thanks for sharing.

Feels like I am reading a published romance. Keep it coming!

Fantastic Sarah. Your stories just get better. Please keep them coming and please write chapter two SOON!

Definitely lovely. I have to check more of your stuffs later. This is just like reading a romance book xD even better.

Absolutely terrific, as usual. Beautifully written. Romantic and hot at the same time, which is always a winning combination. Fantastic description and character development. Can't wait for your next one!

As always, wishful, your writing blows me away. There doesn't seem much left to say that someone else hasn't written before. All I can say is, you had better never stop writing. Your readers would lynch you themselves rather than let that happen.

Guh..pirates! Nuff said.. I love pirates (of the swashbuckling variety). I'm so glad that there are more and more of these kinds of stories coming out in literotica. It's romantic and it's sexy and it has very cool male protagonists (well, I'm female and there's more chance that two females' ideal man will coincide rather than a man and a woman's ideal man).

It's been a long time since someone came out with a good "pirate" story... Can't wait for the next chapter.. Thanks for sharing.

i love your writing. you're just brilliant. please have ch.2 soon, and don't forget your ch.8 too! lol, don't mean to keep nagging you. but you are too good!

The story's been great so far...when is chapter two coming out?

I could see the potential in this story. Some stories on Literotica are terrible, but this one is marvelous. The story have some really good characters and the ability to make the plot into something very beautiful. Please continue on with the story! =)

You realy are one of the most talented authers. But now you cause me a problem, I know must go through even more torment by waiting for the second part of this and the next part of innocent pawn... Oh what ever will I do! Your storys are, honestly, what I look forward to, more so then any others.

Nicely written and great details! I love the fact that the pirate is kinda stalkerish too...Can't wait until the second chapter...please post the second chapter soon...and the next for Innocent Pawn too!

Sincerely, Faithful Reader

Trembling at the knees waiting for the next chapter!!!!

Wonderfully written! Very nicely paced. Just good stuff.

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God, you're writing is amazing. I've been reading your stories for quite some time now...every single one lol and this has to be one of my favourites. I can't wait for the next chapter! You're a brilliant writer. Mwahz!

Throughly engaging. You have wet my appetite. I wait with baited breath for more.

but wheres the rest?

I?m kicking myself for not finding this gem until today but at least I got to read two amazing chapters at once. I was most impressed how you were able to clearly explain Carly?s background in few little paragraphs. Amazing!

What more can I say but..Wow

I loved it. you are a very accoplished writer.

It is always wonderful to find a truly acomplished writer, THANK YOU! Please write more....please.

Awesome, it's making me drip just reading it! I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's great to find a gifted reader like you.

sexy story! A sexy bad boy pirate is better than a Knight on a white horse anyday!

Fantastic story--but please stop using "dewy." Also, no such word as "uncomfortableness." It would be "discomfort." : )

Absolutely love the story and have been waiting some time for another chapter. Awsome work, Also have read all of Inocent Pawn and loved it also. PLEASE PLEASE write more!!!

now this is a story

Can't wait to read the rest of it!!

Wonderfully written, I cant wait to read more.

New fan in Oregon

The story is wonderful, but could you limit the use of the word 'tiny'? its really very annoying... tiny fists, tity feet, tiny breasts... i feel like im reading about a girl, not a woman...

Great Story, I cannot wait to read more!!!!

I love it! You know that feeling you get in your cheast when you don't have any words to describe the way you're feeling well thats what I got when I read this!

Fantastic... also 'little one' you used in here too ")

Great chapter... Enough said.

Sexy read! Pirates are so hot!

I love your stories!! The simpering girl me loves the dominance!

Definitely not in ch1. This is reluctance/non-consensual. So 2 stars for misleading.

What lovely writing. Really enjoyable. Love the first chapter.

It's funny what seemed titillating less than a decade ago, now seems tame, sophomoric even. And don't get me started on the spelling and grammatical errors. Most readers today would rip this up one side, and down the other with caustic comments. I for one don't usually care until errors interfere with the flow, which unfortunately, this is filled with. That said...I'll bet this author has far outgrown both this story, and website, while probably authoring an abundance of published books by now. Everyone has to start somewhere, and wishfulthinking at least began with a raw creative talent that can't be taught!

In what universe can this be romance, when a pirate rapes a virgin? WTF?