All Comments on 'Captured Ch. 04'

you decided to continue this story...but please, write more!

the bit where she calls him beautiful was priceles!! theyre funny together! please write more!

So glad to see the newest chapter of this series!! Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next one!!! (And I'd love to hear more about Daemon and Carly, too.)

Thank you so much for this update. The two of them are hilarious. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love how wonderfully naive Miriam is. I NEED this to continue! More, and quickly!

I think that this a wonderful story so far. One thing though, If you are going to continue this series, Please Please Please don't make us wait six months for the next chapter.

i liked this story, but what about Daemon and Carly? I feel like they're better characters to go with because they've been developed more. Carly is just as innocent, but has a spunky twist Miriam lacks. Daemon is so raw, it's just primal attraction. Oh, and please please please fnish conquered: spoils of war" and "The devil". both are great stories that deserve your attention. thank you for your great writing.

love this story i do hope that you continue it and soon please. It is romantic,sexy and just damn hot. Look forward to reading on. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

Yet another great story. You may take your time punlishing stories, but they are worth the wait. Keep with it..

Thank you for the next part in the story. I loved it and can't wait to read more!

So hot. I love how you're focusing on Miriam now. I love the passion and tension that they share. <3

Beyond fantastic/amazing/incredible. Please, please post more of this story soon...and more of The Novice and The Devil's Bargain! :P

it's so so so great, how could you write like that? it makes my heart skip a hundred beats, wow man you too good.

DELICIOUS!!!!!

i love this story! plase write moe!!!!

loved it !!!!!! pls pls pls write more ........ i'm dyin to know wat happens next... pls pls .....

this story gets me seriously hot... PLEAS PLEASE Write more i need this

pleeeeease finish this...it's not even the sex (tho it's hot)...i actually like the characters and their various foibles...=)

I am happy to have found not only a story to look forward to, but an author who seems to be unable to write a bad story. I have read many of your stories and enjoyed them all. I must say that Captured is my favorite. I hope you will write more soon, I'm addicted to your writing and cant think of anything bad to say about it. PLEASE dont end this story yet, it is simply to good to end. Hope to hear more soon.

im really upset that its not finished because im dying to read it!!!! =( Please continue writing its a great story....

LOL. Glad to see that the pirate is coaxing the lady to give up herself, not tie her with a slave collar.

I love this story! Please write the next chapter ASAP !! You got talent !

every girls dreamz come true, glad to see carly found her happy ending but what about miriam?, surely there should be coming?...please continue this story..

Sexy, tender and romantic. Great pacing with the story and building anticipation. You've done a great job of making the interaction and story unique from Carly's. Bravo!

what more could a girl ask for? Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Could it be this year (2006)?

Wow! Really good!

Don't you just wish there were pirates like this out there? My god, I'm sure I'm not the only one desperately wishing to be captured right now! Please, please continue this story soon...

I cant wait for more!

more I want more!!!! I'd also like to know if theres a thrid pirate brother for me? seriously though, you are an excellent writer and I absolutely love this story

I liked it!

But I wanna hear more about Carly and the other guy.. I forget his name.

Nooooo why'd u have to stop i love it please write more you are a great writer i love all of the characthers Carly Miriam Daemon and Devlin continue on bother stories

so...when i first ran across your story, i couldn't help but laugh a little. pirates...like something from grocery store novels with fabio on the cover. i'm not laughing now. well written, and it's driving me crazy not to know the end of either story line. miriam and devlin? carly and daemon? please write the end?

please please write more! You can't just leave that wonderful story like that! Please! I will keep on checking to see if you've continued it.

I WANT A PIRATE! I WANT A PIRATE! I WANT A PIRATE!

Seriously, please write more about both Carly and Mirriam. Excellent work!

You have to write more on these four!... This is the first and probably only comment I will ever make and I'm making it because your story is sooooooo good it deserves to be finished... Please, please, please!

i;d much rather read more about carly and daemon they are def a 10

I love carly and hr hunk. Please wwrite more abouut themm. (:

Miriam is okay and Devlin seems like a hunk, but I would rather hear more of Carly and Deamon’s story. Since the last chapter is already written, I hope I won’t be disappointed. Either way, I love this story as I have your others.