All Comments on 'Caputpedes'

Took me a while to finish it, but I enjoyed the ride, and the rides! Was this some sort of competition to include every conceivable form of sex? Loved the ending and the epilogue. An achievement to write something this long. Bravo. PK

@PeterKimi - thanks for always having something nice to say ❤️❤️❤️. It brightens my day. Em

Wow! Such a ride you have taken us on

Obviously you know I've already read this, at least in it's raw form, as you worked on it.

I'm looking forward to delving into it again as a whole piece this time, and strictly as a reader.

It's been a fun ride indeed, and a blast collaborating with you.

Your lesbian porn is much better than you hetero. Glad you got rid of the annoying David guy. Though I have some issues with your new sidekick. Only read the first half so far. That’s a lot of words. A

@lc69hunter - glad to have had you along 😊. Em

@PrettyAmelia - don’t worry about having only read half, there were some complicated words in there. I know you struggle with polysyllables. Em

@Djmac1031 - thank you for being a big part of it 😊Em

Home run, Emily! Perfect end to the trilogy. Although, “Emily’s” powers are truly frightening.

Thanks so much for writing!

Now that's some effective political activism!

And that double tube filling with Duxie was quite the sexy pretzel. Amazing. Then interesting adding Na-ri's pov, and seeing Emily from her perspective.

Creative, funny, sexy. A great read. Thank you.

Thank you for the kind comments. I really do appreciate them. But I’m also enough of a realist to recognize that they aren’t enough to hold back the tsunami of intentional negativity I’m suffering at present. Em

I gave you a good score even though - sorry, I haven't had time to read most of it yet. The existing score is actually quite good. I do know what an avatar is - it's somebody who can fly an airplane.

I know, I could be accused of log-rolling - not an honest assessment. But on another site I used to give all the other contestants - they were really contests - good scores for some reason I couldn't fully explain. Then they changed the scoring system so it wasn't worth doing any longer.

@gunhilltrain - thanks, hun. At least I think. I’m not sure I got all of that. Em

Rather embarrassingly. I noticed that there was a run of a few paragraphs in the middle that I had not even proofread. I have no idea how that happened. It was one of the last things I wrote, so maybe it escaped the start to end readings I did. Edited version submitted plus a few rogue typos from elsewhere. Should be fixed in a couple of weeks. Em

don’t like this. liked the first one. 2nd was okay. i’ve wanked to some pretty weird shit but this was hard to get into, lost my interest at the half point and did not seem like you knew what you wanted to do with it. sad I wasted time reading it.

@Anonymous - thanks for taking the time to comment. Sorry that this wasn’t for you. Strangely, I knew exactly what I wanted to do with this and where I was heading to. I figured out the end and epilogue very early on. But I apprecIate it wasn’t a destination you wanted to get to, or at least by the path I had mapped out. Emily

I was unaware that there were two stories previous to Caputpedes and was struggling to 'find my footing' at the beginning of this one. I slowly caught on to most of what was going on and felt fully up-to-speed by the end. At first I thought it was a writing style choice (metering out context a little at a time) but it was just me being clueless. LOL Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed the story, even though I'm not really a fan of tentacles-centric fiction. But it is a well-told story IMO. Always a fan of those. 5/5*

@Fenris420 - sorry to leave you swimming for the surface. Maybe I’m a really bad judge of whether the story is easy to pick up. If you have the time to read the first two episodes, I’d love to hear what you think. Thank you for being so kind about episode three 😊. Em

A uniquely good three story collective with the right mix of affection, love, kink, fantasy, fetish and plot. I can’t wait for the movie!

@steelyblue73 - thanks so much for saying 😊. Em

I wish to thank you Emily for a very enjoyable read I waited until the end of the third chapter to comment because of never knowing where you were going to take this tale. Thank you.

@DocGiff - thank you for the kind feedback. 😊 Em

I’ve been reading science fiction since the ‘50’s and this is the kinkiest sci-fi I have ever read, seen, or heard about. As good in its own way as the Foundation trilogy or the Lord of the Rings, congratulations, wonderfully written.

@740gordy - thank you so much. I dialed the kink to 11. I thought the genre let me do that. But I tried to make the Sci-Fi as hard as - well, insert your own joke here. I wanted a credible, but incredible, world. I also left no Sci-Fi trope unreferenced It was the most rewarding thing to write and transformative for me as an author. I am desperately fond of it. Em

"...the use of pediments, entablatures, and columns in judicial erections was a fundamental constant of Nature."

"...hung in the air much like bricks don't."

lol

Brilliant. My only oof moment was the horse, but this was top tier sci fi adventure.

A rare amount of notes and engagement is impressive as well. Thank you.

@Voxman314 - the horse was meant to be kinda uncomfortable, also stressing that the women’s work wasn’t all fun and games. Glad you approve of the language 😊 Emily