All Comments on 'Car Show Slut'

I'm sure most model girls at car shows are not sluts! It's a horrible word anyway and spoils this otherwise very exciting and horny tale.

Good Story David, and well written. Thanks for an enjoyable read.

The part I liked the best was the visit to the spray-on tattoo artist.

My wife is a business executive, and it is very easy for me to imagine her helping out a work colleague like this.

If she came home with tattoos like that, it would be very hot having her tell me about how the grubby guy applied them!

Great story.

Thanks...please continue!

That was very hot and needs more parts.

Terrific story! I loved the slow build-up and the excrutiating, tantalizing details as she delved further and further into the fantasy. You are very talented! Please keep writing.

On top of the hotness, this read very smoothly. Well done! I liked Amateur Photographer a lot, too.

Anne is a really nice woman, a lady. However, she has the ability to be a real slut and that makes her exciting. I love this story.

Nookiehunter

loved the story, and would love to have been in the car. I can't wait for part 2, and part 3 and part 4 . . . . . .

Kim

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It's delightful to trust the author to handle the technical aspects of writing and simply to be carried along in a well thought out story without distraction by numerous mistakes. This is not solely the result of talent, but also of careful editing.

This was a very high quality story, and I'm delighted to see that davidwriter has other submissions. I will read them straightaway.

This is one of the best stories I've read for a long while - particularly the tattoo scene!

This is the first Literotica story I've ever bookmarked to read and read again. Very well-written and edited. This is also the first story to ever bring me to orgasm. (!!!) david, I can't wait to read more of your work!

this one along time ago and lost track of it...i was glad to see a new addition so i could catch up with it...thank you for allowing us to read you...enjoyed it. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I came across this series late and found it to be one of those stories I have read several times and have bookmared to see more additions!

I'm extremely happy to see it's still being updated!

Not a fan of forced nor reluctance stories. Would have appreciated it if you had tagged it as such.

I'm not sure what category this story belongs in... wait, lemee look it up . . . . exhibitionist, good. Well written slide down a slippery slope. Thanks.

A Very good story so far

...about this story is the main character.

I read a couple of chapters yet and have to say that she is the most intriguing and well developed female character I've seen in a while.

There are parts of the first half a dozen chapters that should feel odd. But they don’t. You make it feel real in a way. Just like you know somebody who lived through it.

I gotta say that it’s perfect the way it is!

Thank you for writing this!

I'm glad to see you didn't continue the story. What drove the story was the "proper" woman corporate executive temporarily living as a "car show slut". The story is not going to have the same appeal if she does it again and again. Leave the story as is. It was good enough and hot enough to stand on its own without anything more.

You are talented enough to just write something else.

Very sexy story. Plausible plot and the main character is believable. Most of the 5 stars I give our rounding up but this one earned all five stars.

Looking forward to reading the rest of the story xoxoxoxoxo Annette

PS Nice tight writing style

Saw you published another chapter to the series! Thought I'd review some... and enjoying it all over again!

reread this story. very well written and very realistic. def one of my faves!