All Comments on 'Care Home Ch. 02: Lucy's Story'

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GirochenGirochenalmost 7 years ago
Eye Twitches

Very good story. There are some misspellings in there that keep catching my eyes. I know I read and reread to smack all of those myself and still miss a few. But I thought I'd pass it on. Well done, good concept and style. I don't get all the references like a flat white, I'm American. But that same sentence has late that should be latte. Anyway, keep it up.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Nice And Sexy****

It's never to late to get it on sexually. Thanks for sharing.

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