All Comments on 'Careful What You Bet On'

Interesting to start to what could be a good story but it never really got past the set up.

Very well laid out and set up... looks like you have more than just us in the palm of your hand!

So far so good. Sounds like an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Good job!

to a couple other story lines from a month or so ago. Still, looking forward to the next installment.

I cant wait for the next episode, i think i like where this is heading> Good way to leave the reader, in suspense and waiting for more!

Excellent introduction. Looking forward to the next installment. Set the scene nicely, and could be the start of a series of stories? Titillating.

great set up! now I have to dream how it will turn out. please follow up soon!