All Comments on 'Careful What You Promise'

I'd normally say that Jackson needs to meet a baseball bat in a dark alleyway, and Kimberly needs to be stationed on a street corner where her talents can be put to better use. But really this wimp got exactly what he deserved, and probably what he secretly wanted.

Nothing new with this story, just all the extreme cuckold clichés, and I guess the cucks will love it as much as the 'real men' will hate it. Personally not my cup of tea, just too many of those overused clichés.

The solution is simple. The moment she moved his stuff to the spare bedroom he should have packed up and left - end of the story. He had another choice but he could have spent life in jail for that so it is better to walk away and start fresh and let Jackson have the hoe.

LOL 5 big stars. Great Story, Great Writing, and Great Effort. I can rate the story a 5 even if I didn't like the outcome. Those are two different things. Meanwhile, had it been me as the hubby, Jackson would have had a horrible accident. Horrible. probably involving gasoline and fire. Either that or divorce. probably divorce either way as the wife is such a cheating whore. Let her raise her own black babies by herself. LOL

As soon as I saw the "impregnation" tag I knew this was a loser. I could MAYBE see letting her have some time with the ex, but get her pregnant? Then he promises to actually step aside but NOT divorce her?

My wife's boss took complete ownership of her pussy 16 months ago and my sex life now consists of eating her pussy and jerking off. I enjoy being a little penis cuckold knowing I don't get to have sex with my wife anymore.

So lucky to have a real man with a real cock to satisfy my wife.

It’s obvious that he didn’t intend to honor those promises from the beginning. So, then why do it?

Tell her that just as the sentence changed so did his willingness to share her.

Threaten divorce and put her in chastity until resolved.

Kick her out.

Move them to another room.

Cut her off from all money.

Record evidence of adultery.

Certainly don’t allow Jackson to move in.

…etc.

Filed under Be careful what you read.

Kimberly - "I can't marry you," she told me. "I'm still in love with Jackson."

I thought about her declaration of love for Jackson...for about two seconds. "Have a nice life", I said.

THE END!

There, fixed the ending for you! Now maybe you can concentrate on a new hobby? You just don't have the "write" stuff for Loving Wives. The emphasis of this story was staunchly interracial sex and white male humiliation. Your own tags quantify this. A man is denied ANY future access and to his wife, he is expelled FOR LIFE to the guest bedroom of his own house! He is expected to pay for his wife's adultery, raise her bastard child. Because of an asinine five year old promise? After five years separation from jackson, how can kimberly still love him? Her infatuation camouflages a deeper psychological problem. The unnamed (the husband doesn't even have a fricking name for crying out loud!) husband should have just divorced her. End of story. 1☆

Yeah, that was gross...and no one is gonna put up with that shit, like 24 guys on Earth would be into this and this was EXTREMELY disrespectful even for a story it hit insane levels. I only continued on the hope that he was gonna frame him or burn them somehow but nope, just went along passively. Wack

Buster nailed it. The writing was excellent. The subject of the writing left me feeling like I just had a bath in spit. The writing deserves a five but in an effort to discourage such topics there will be no vote from me

Only thing that bites this guy is the total lack of spine. What a chump!

left out tags for: racist, pure mythology, idiocy, science deniers, and more.

Complete BS:

"I never would have married you if I didn't believe you meant what you said," said Kimberly.

“I never would have married you if I thought Jackson would ever get out of jail” I said. “Bye.”

FTFY

Yeah, that was dumb. She doesn't believe in divorce but all that other shit is okay? Two star due to the premise.

Jackson could have stayed in jail and a person like her would have cucked him with someone else at some point. Which would have been fine with him, cause seem love being a cuck more than loving Kimberly.

They all deserve each other.

Had me completely hard from start to finish…The haters can’t accept that there are men who need this…When she was first unfaithful, my wife was in tears begging me to take her back, but then I showed her my massive erection…Thanks for a great story..JT