All Comments on 'Carpe Diem Ch. 02'

Amazing story and build up to a gorgeous erotic scene that delivers twice!

Please write more -- and give that sexy Josh some chest hair!

Still a charming premise.

But the sex seems more rushed than in Chapter 1.

Four stars.

More please. Good characters, interesting story. I want to see what happens with the deals. On top of all that, the sex is fabulous!!

Your writing is excellent as always! I love how you put so much detail into the location and their jobs. I also enjoy the balance of hearing both Josh and Amanda’s points of view. I’m interested in hearing more dialogue between them so we can get a better idea of their personalities in future chapters :) excited for more sexy times ;)

i enjoyed part 1, and didn't enjoy this. i think there just wasn't any tension. part 1 had a lot of "will they / won't they" energy, as well as a lot of tension due to the uneven power dynamic of their work relationship. but it seems like all of that disappeared here.

Holy makeral ! I’ve read thousands of stories on this site and with confidence can say that this chapter was one of the hottest ones EVER ! Your erotic writing is so incredibly good. The shifting positions and descriptions of their feelings during the build up and the final spasms as they cum together was spectacular ! I held my breath as did they and felt I was in the room with them. Whew ! One of the easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever. Would give you 10 if I could. Can’t wait for next chapter. ❤️

Nice premise.

Sex a bit too automatic.

Lacks tension.

Needs teasing before getting hot and heavy.

Nevertheless, five stars.

good story premise, gave you four stars instead of five because the sex was too over the top gushy and not really how I felt two consummate professionals would behave