All Comments on 'Carpe Diem Ch. 02'

good story premise, gave you four stars instead of five because the sex was too over the top gushy and not really how I felt two consummate professionals would behave

Nice premise.

Sex a bit too automatic.

Lacks tension.

Needs teasing before getting hot and heavy.

Nevertheless, five stars.

Holy makeral ! I’ve read thousands of stories on this site and with confidence can say that this chapter was one of the hottest ones EVER ! Your erotic writing is so incredibly good. The shifting positions and descriptions of their feelings during the build up and the final spasms as they cum together was spectacular ! I held my breath as did they and felt I was in the room with them. Whew ! One of the easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever. Would give you 10 if I could. Can’t wait for next chapter. ❤️

i enjoyed part 1, and didn't enjoy this. i think there just wasn't any tension. part 1 had a lot of "will they / won't they" energy, as well as a lot of tension due to the uneven power dynamic of their work relationship. but it seems like all of that disappeared here.

Your writing is excellent as always! I love how you put so much detail into the location and their jobs. I also enjoy the balance of hearing both Josh and Amanda’s points of view. I’m interested in hearing more dialogue between them so we can get a better idea of their personalities in future chapters :) excited for more sexy times ;)

More please. Good characters, interesting story. I want to see what happens with the deals. On top of all that, the sex is fabulous!!

Still a charming premise.

But the sex seems more rushed than in Chapter 1.

Four stars.

Please write more -- and give that sexy Josh some chest hair!

Amazing story and build up to a gorgeous erotic scene that delivers twice!