All Comments on 'Cassie's Choice'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

bring on the next part plssss

MigbirdMigbird12 months ago

As a near hopeless romantic this well written short piece was densely packed — so emotionally painful. Unrequited love, not so sure (?). Yes, lots of sex — well scripted/very erotic; and a storyline rich with potential for plot and character development. If a standalone piece, so be it — I was moved/felt real, but in the end frustrated and wanted more (and maybe that was your intention — feeling like Lottie in that moment). That said, the potential is there for an in-depth exploration of character and plot. Hope you continue to share.

haltwhogoestherehaltwhogoesthere12 months ago

Well, as I read this, I know what Lottie thinks Cassie's choice is. There's a lot of ambiguity in the conversation though....I could see her choice being Lottie, and bursting through the door later in the evening to clear things up. Trying to sneak a sequel in on us? Please?

PappasleazePappasleaze12 months ago

This was so well written. I was engaged through each scene, each thought. I hope we get to read the answers to all of Lottie's questions.

pettyredheadpettyredhead12 months agoAuthor

There are more chapters to come. I just published ch. 2 and I am just waiting for approval from the mod team for it to upload. It will probably be a couple of days before it is approved but just know it is on the way. I am currently working on writing ch. 3. Thank you to everyone who had read this story! Much love <3

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Well written, very engaging, definitely worth a further part/parts. Thanks will read more of yours

MaezedMaezed12 months ago

Great job, I am loving it! Next chapter please :)

toesucker1toesucker112 months ago

This was hot, and the emotional depth makes it even hotter. Now we are hooked — good job, prettyredhead.

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