All Comments on 'Casting a Spell'

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OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
Nice

It's a pleasure to read some honest to god, unadulterated fantasy. Take the unlikely, add in some improbabilities and little of the out-of-the-realm of possibilities and you get this story. Fun reading without worrying about the things that never really happen, but occur matter-of-factly here. Everyone is svelte, beautiful, and either well endowed with nice boobs or a "hard-as-steel" cock. Must be nice! At least we can read about it even if we never experience it ourselves. 4*, but could have been 5* except author committed one of the unpardonable sins by misusing the I-me pronoun choice. Hate it.

kinkygeezerkinkygeezerover 3 years ago
Wonderful!

Hot and romantic. I really enjoyed this, especially the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A wonderful romantic story. Will there be a chapter 2?

Archer7998Archer7998over 3 years ago

OMG please add more down the road. I loved reading this.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 3 years ago

Hot story with a delightfully sexy heroine. I liked her and wanted her to be happy, even if she did jump to a conclusion. Glad it ended as it did. Great job!

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyalmost 2 years ago

Very nice sweet story! Thanks

Billyboy1953Billyboy1953almost 2 years ago

Love it! As with all your stories. 5stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This ain't romance, more erotic coupling

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Too short

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

5* BUT too short

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