All Comments on 'Casting Aspersions Ch. 03'
by WifeWatchman
- 20 Comments
Anonymousabout 4 years agoOf course Iron Crowbar escapes alive, probably with help from his police force. Some of the bad guys will die, the rest may escape.
Question is who is behind the attack?
Also, who made the leak was it the FBI Agent who wanted to polygraph the Iron Crowbar or was it the Rovers BAU unit, or some other Swamp Frog (who may have tapped into Team Lazarus' cell phones, emails, etc...
Last who is the ultimate Puppet Master coordinating everything?
fuzzy94about 4 years agoDon needs Kato in the Black Beauty, he needs Iron Wolf and the rest of the ninjas, someone better open a huge can of whoop-ass on these badguys.
john_sixfooterabout 4 years agoWonderful writing!
The first real, overt attempt to assassinate Don. Rocket launchers, grenades, M-4s, these indicate a well-funded, perhaps federal-level operation.
I don't believe we know what Don carries, weapon wise, beside his crowbar.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoWOW, you have really put the IRON CROWBAR in one bad situation. I hope the cavalry is also on the way before that car becomes toast.
WifeWatchmanabout 4 years agoAuthorThe next chapter in the story has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoOh ... .... .. - (morse code), you have done it again!!!!! How long to wait in total lock down for the next episode? Here we have minimum of 17 days house bound by law.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoId be reLLY worried if IC wasnt the hero. expect him to seriously do some deadly damage as that could have been his family adn we are overdue for some bigtime ass kicking or just plain removal.
drycreeksabout 4 years agoOMGosh i can believe u r leaving us on edge like this. Dude im telling u are missing ur calling this story line could be a tv series or movie series u are great. Thanks so much for some too notch entertainment.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI loved this, as with all your stories. However, I am a little disappointed that neither the sheriff nor Teresa took the initiative to provide even discreet protection to the crowbar. Of course, Don could've thought of that himself, also.
It's going to kill me waiting for Lit to put up the next episode.
katranmanabout 4 years agoHow does Don get out of this one? It's gonna be tough waiting for the next chapter to drop...
666icemanabout 4 years agoThe Green Hornet and car arrive fire a few rounds up the perps ass sorry back-side and they end up as toast. At least more than one has to be caught alive and placed to answer to the Three Angels, given a beat down so to say, then when all think the IC has gone for good he enters the room and meets that FBI guy who wanted to lie detector him sitting in ic1.
Well it seemed good before I wrote it down, now it seems far fetched and proves that WW is much better at this writing stuff than lil ol me.
Serious though this is one of your best edge of the seat stories so far WW, believe me I have gone through every one of the past stories at least twice. I do get a vibe about me that you are putting in many small threads, that are not that important now but in future tales we will need to remembers them, that is if we are to stand a chance of sorting out who done what to whom.
Max 5 * to you WW and can't wait for next instalment.
Wishing all of you readers and WW along with your families good health through this trying time. As I write this in a total lock-down situation, forced on me and my lovely wife for the next three months, good job we have a large rear isolated back garden/yard. Iceman
bbarto1900about 4 years agoi read a lot of about your use of cliffhangers. i, for one, appreciate them, some of the
stories i read are 8 to 12 pages long. i tend to hurry through them and dont really enjoy the prolonged reading. thanks for keeping to 5 or so pages. a person can read and take the time to digest the data and get a great perspective. great story.i love your work
Anonymousabout 4 years agoWith all the focus on Don, nobody thought about providing police protection when he is outside of police facilities?
Keep up the great work!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoCould there be a culvert/storm drain next to the car? Crawl away and disappear to raise havoc among the elites.
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