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All Comments on 'Casual Date Leads to Big Things'

by EgmontGrigor2021

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue on with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice “feel good” story. Uneven writing, but honest dialog. Probably an early effort - author should read the critical comments and further develop the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I found this writing style just too hard to read. Maybe it suits someone, but for me it destroyed a storyline which had potential. Pity.

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