All Comments on 'Casus Belli Ch. 03: Road to Ruin'

Im so scared with every champter i read. The mire i learn of these lovely female characters, the more i fear the orcs. Those poor maids at the mercy of the orcs?! My poor polly!!

I only give 5s - lit authors work hard - so no numbers - just a comment

Way too complicated

Your readers don’t have context and developing it is boring as hell

I won’t be reading the rest

Now

Battlestar has potential if you don’t overly complicate it

Hi Mike9947

I assume it's the description of battles and army movements you find too complex.

I'm wondering about what context you think readers are missing though... (?)

And thanks for commenting, it's appreciated.