All Comments on 'Cat Caller to Cocksucker: Ch. 05-06'

Had such great promise with the slow and methodical seduction in the first half or so of part 1 (Chapter 1 - 4).

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At this point its sort of devolved into essentially bitch this and bitch that, not to mention the hair trigger punishments over the slightest thing. Like, the guy *just* started down this path, have some patience, damn. Essentially turning the protagonist into a sex slave. Which, fair enough, hes forced into it. But still....a little more compasion from Devion wouldn't hurt.

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Over all, I find the plot to be a tad too cruel. A bit of after care, a bit of having Devion actually take care of the protagonist would've been a nice contrast to the forced elements imho. Eventually having the guy question himself before leading us full circle back to the very begining of the story.

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2 - 3/5 as of right now for both parts combined. With the elements mentioned hopefully added in future chapters, I can see this story easily reaching a 5/5.

really hoping you continue this story and add more chapters. It's so hot to read!!

Nah nothing wrong with a bit of cat calling...