All Comments on 'Cat Caller to Cocksucker: Ch. 05-06'

Nah nothing wrong with a bit of cat calling...

really hoping you continue this story and add more chapters. It's so hot to read!!

Had such great promise with the slow and methodical seduction in the first half or so of part 1 (Chapter 1 - 4).

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At this point its sort of devolved into essentially bitch this and bitch that, not to mention the hair trigger punishments over the slightest thing. Like, the guy *just* started down this path, have some patience, damn. Essentially turning the protagonist into a sex slave. Which, fair enough, hes forced into it. But still....a little more compasion from Devion wouldn't hurt.

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Over all, I find the plot to be a tad too cruel. A bit of after care, a bit of having Devion actually take care of the protagonist would've been a nice contrast to the forced elements imho. Eventually having the guy question himself before leading us full circle back to the very begining of the story.

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2 - 3/5 as of right now for both parts combined. With the elements mentioned hopefully added in future chapters, I can see this story easily reaching a 5/5.