by ErosinaScarlett
I really prefer this new extended version and ending to the previous one which you wrote. We got a lot more Hott sex, Rafael was able to redeem himself and Daunte still got his woman.
I gave you 5 stars throughout because over all I enjoyed the plot and characters. That said, I would have enjoyed more story and less sex. Also, it was rather annoying to have you mention "waitress" frequently. We (the readers) got that she was a waitress in a shifter bar. We also got that Daunte was a jaguar and Rafe was a tiger; there was no need for mentioning that constantly either.