All Comments on 'Catch and Release Ch. 02'

...only because it's not longer. One quibble--there are a few places where punctuation would clarify your meaning; for instance: "But you already are. Aren't you Miss Hawthorne?" It took a moment to realize that he wasn't asking whether she was Miss Hawthorne. But this is indeed a quibble. Keep 'em coming! (If you'll pardon the overworked expression.)

I'm loving it, go for it, cheers

Please... I don't know, if I want to slap or to kiss you...

Sweetie... More, okay?

And... thanks for this erotic story! The characters are - in all of your storys - round and alive. (Is "round" and "alive" right? My english is not very well.) I adore your style. Keep going, sweetie! (Please!)

"Cock sucking fugue" is a definite gem. Good god but you've got a gift for the naughty, Darce!

-PF

Is that a PacoFear I see before me? My very favorite rat bastard reading my mmf story?

Welcome to the dark side honey, I hope to see you here again real soon.

seriously, come one already. i'm in love with these characters! you are a brilliant writer. :)

I am really enjoying your story! You were right when you said that this wasn't just porn. You write a fascinating, intriguing story intertwined with the right amount of sexual escapades. I am also fascinated as I think you either live in the same town as me, or know the place that I live in (not to mention the university where I attended!) it adds another dimension to it for me imagining this taking place right here ;)

i dont even know if you will receive this, but im hopeful simply coz i only came across this story now, 2014, and it was written in 2010!!! that makes me worried ill never read the rest :(

Please write the next chapter!!

And more action between grace and Jules please, forget drew, don't like him