All Comments on 'Catching Ava'

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dvmrdvmrover 1 year ago

Great story. I hope there are more chapters to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

High school is two words. I have a hard time believing that a high school teacher who goes to a high school every day to teach high schoolers misspells high school as much as you do in this story. That's beyond suspending disbelief. Between that and awkwardly describing a skirt as tripping, I did not get far in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amazing story. More please!

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