All Comments on 'Catching Them'

And then the story fell off the cliff. It was mostly about some big dick sex. Not very much information, like why did he call off the marriage in the first place? What do they do for work? What about families? Why doesn't he wait a few months and buy a new Ford Bronco? You know - important questions! But the ending seemed to be an afterthought. His friend runs out, pants in hand and he what? Goes after him and beats him up? Never talks to him again? Without any explanation or confrontation she grabs a few things and leaves? To do what? Go live with Mr. Big Dick? Go to her parents? Quit her job? File for a divorce? SO many questions. SO few answers. Try again. This was cut short and it ruined any chance you had of this being a decent or entertaining read.

2 stars

Apparently she didn't want to be married anymore, at least to him.

Fantasy and stretching things is one thing but this was way over the line. His friend easily seduces the wife, friend has a horse cock, guy watches wife cheat and does nothing. Right at the start he should dovorce her but at least stop the sex before she gets the big cock sex. Leave her frustrated for a while until she leaves with big dick.

When the story fell off that cliff, there were no survivors... it even took a few readers with it.

Lost me when he got hard watching them.

Makes no sense, if the MC didn't want this to happen, why did he wait until they were done - if he did want it to happen, why not join in? The tale just doesn't add up - and that is without adding her cryptic comment...

all 3 are idiots in this farce

Was about a dick ? The dick did this the dick did that !! Are you gay all you write about is dicks !

Why write the set-up without also writing the conflict?

They are both better off without each other. Pathetic.

It sounded like it was mostly one of those that shouldn't have been written. The non-plot (description of sex that lasted the entire story) finally got over with and they got divorced. Why didn't he stop; them when he first got there? Oops, that would have taken away the story.

“Since Pat was down, there wasn't any room in the driveway for my car, so I parked in a common lot just 50 feet down from my house.”

Who in fuck is “Pat,” and what’s he doing in your house? How’s he know your wife? Did it even occur to you to explain any of that? Jesus, do you bother to read this shit back?

After that, it’s cliché time. Guy watches from a hidden vantage point, but somehow his line of sight is never obstructed, and he sees and hears everything in excruciating detail.

Un-fucking-believably bad.

Just another worthless cuck story. #1

I think "F" for failure on every aspect - not sure why its in this section - or any section. Incomplete story and as a previous reader said - off a cliff and no survivors

Lazy author creating a story that HE would never believe and that HE would never do himself. Waste of time and effort, insulting to the reader.

I'm sure every story that has a description of a hard dick loses you...or is that more likely, distracts you. Most guys get distracted by tits or a nice ass, it seems you have something else on your mind.

this is supposed to be a story???

. . . but you never told us how he felt when he had been totally outclassed in bed.

Let’s face it: that’s a big part of what men fear if their wives sample other wares, and in this story, that’s exactly what happened. No reconciliation possible because he knew that every time he fucked her in the future she’d be comparing him to Pat, and he couldn’t measure up.

RR

to an erotically exciting story!

If you aren't going to deal with things like that, don't put them in the story! It was bad enough you spent so much time building up to his confrontation, but when it did happens, it was almost nothing. It was another case where it seems as if the writer got tired of its own story.

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As I said, that was bad enough, but then you purposely added those remarks. The first served no purpose except to continue the story, but the second cut that off without dealing with it.

That was interesting. It could have gone several ways.

Another willing cuckold getting off watching wife get fucked by another man. At least he filed for divorce. I guess stopping this from happening never entered his mind?

Yes, it's your spelling. Or there's "I could smell the slight scent of pot and their voices from the back deck." which says that the husband could smell their voices.

I found your story erotic, but all the mistakes distracting. Please find an editor. Thanks!

I lost my fiance to a buddy who lived with us for 2 months while his house was being renovated. My thin little 4 incher was no match for his thick 8+ incher. When he left she went with him.

Great story. Sucks when someone you thought was a friend steals your significant other. Been there.

A cuck tale disguised. Who the fuck watches when he could’ve stopped it.

Kept his wife and lost a friend, who should’ve been thumped.

Stupid story in the end

What was she expecting?

Thanks.

Caught my wife having a threesome with her best friend and her best friends new big cocked boyfriend. It turned me on watching. Didnt let her know i saw them as i want to catch them again. Mmmm

you need an editor

@Anonymous Re: "@Sbrooks103" - It's not the hard dick, it's the husband's dick getting hard watching his wife with another man. But you knew that, you just needed to get in your tiny shot.

*1, he is outside looking in, how do he know how many inches how do call friend penetrated his wife? Poorly written!

She needed a big cock and she got it...like most women do. She was never going to stay with her husband after getting fucked so well. Ask me or any other woman; size matters, a lot!

You need to decide if you want to write cheating wife or cuck stories.

Where are all of these women who orgasm instantly simply by sticking 7 or 8 inches of "big cock" in them? Loving Wives is full of them, but I've yet to encounter one or even hear much about them in real life. I'm above average in size, but have found if I try a session like the one described here, all I'll end up with is a sore and pissed off partner. I guess I'm still hunting a true size queen.

I’d have left for gas and set his car and house door on fire. Then go to rear with a bat and break his knees as they run out of the house

2 stars cos of the divorce... the minute he said he was rock hard I started to skim. At least express disgust at reacting like that. Just hate the implication that an erection equals enjoyment rather than a reaction to an erotic scene.

Also it's cue, not queue. A cue is a signal to do something. A queue is a line waiting for something. You might queue for your cue...

Didn’t fit together too many conflicting aspects.

Pathetic.

Loved the way this ended - toxic friend runs out and he divorces the cheating slut wife....unlike so many other stories he didnt become a wimp and get turned on by his wife fucking his big cock friend

It was an ok ending. Woyld loved to have seen a German Shepherd bite the ex friend in the ass.. for hoo hahs and giggles

Would love a follow up

Pig

What kind of wimpy pussy doesn’t step in and stop it happening. Should have kicked his so called friends ass.

A man would at least interrupt the fuckers and stop their fun then kick them out with a goodbye forever.

Plain stupid fantasy story poorly written

Pathetic cuck story.

BETA BITCH STORIES/TAGS HERE.

Low quality story. jimjam69 is right. It was a waste of time.

He essentially let it happen, so why the divorce?

Short but not rushed into things. Disturbing and hits the target.

Also, if he walked to backyard, as anyone in real life would do, there wouldn't be a story. If he heard the f.in when he arrived, it would be the same as every other story.

I suggest you wrote an alternative, changing the story after he heard their conversation.

Suggestion:

I coughed and they sat looked at me, Pat left.

The end.

5 points for the short but full story.

Femdom agitprop is real. Don’t temp them. Help them be true.

Retarted a complete idiotic story stop writing bullshit asshole

All these stories where these dudes never want to confront the cheaters are getting old. At least this husband finally, but too late.