All Comments on 'Category Three'

Pretty great story. More interested to hear what David does about his situation.

Nice. I love sph personally and well David got the full version. Will his adventures continue?

In such a futuristic society, I wouldn't think the so-called teacher would humiliate David. They should have advanced beyond this.

Glad you enjoyed it! This was always conceived as a one-off and it has been my most unpopular story... so no, no follow ups, I'm afraid. You might like "Giving The Interns A Helping Hand" which inverts this premise (nerd big, jock small). I'm also writing the Sun, Sand & Skin series which explores and subverts the whole SPH thing.

This was really good, I don't understand why it's so low rated

Fun and imaginative story. Thanks. Will have a look at some of your others

This was ridiculous. AND I LOVED IT haha. Light, funny, and absurdly kinky.

Well written and very enjoyable...deserves a much higher score. Some people just don't dig SPH, I guess. Great story, thanks for taking the time. I will check out more of your stories.

Thanks for all the positive comments! MyBareTorso: I'm a huge fan of your Oz Beach Boy stories. Really looking forward to the next part of The Barbarian!

Amazing story I think a similar scenario once but with some diferences

Number's 1 use condoms or another contraceptive methods to keep their numbers low, and keep the society balanced.

Number's 2 are pretty much the same.

Number's 3 on the other way, they may reproduce if they complete several tasks, as much they work they reproduce, if they don't work they are keep in chastity 24/7, essentially breeding only the hardest workers.

Very hot, would love to see more. I hope David is made to watch Flo lose her virginity, but maybe he'll only be allowed to hear her moans and screams through the wall instead.

Either way, I hope you really dig the humiliation into David. Every orgasm he has should be impotent, humiliating and submissive >:)

I do wish u would do a part two so bad.

I love this story please do a follow up