by noskillalltrash
Hello everyone! I am currently working on the 4th installment. I am still new to this, and would appreciate any and all feedback! Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed, and let me know what you would like to see in the future. :)
First off you’re doing an amazing job so far, this is shaping up to be one of the best series that I’ve ever read. The way you describe forced submission is great. I also really like how you seem to be setting up a web of established characters with dynamics between them. My only piece of advice is to add more post match content. Seeing the loser be dominated is always fun and it adds to the stakes of the match.
Thank you so much!! :)
Understood. I will make sure to incorporate that in the coming chapters.
I really appreciate the feedback, and of course, hope you enjoy what happens next!!
Thank you! It will be coming out soon! Most likely before the beginning of next week.
The series is back! :) I'm trying new things. Open to suggestions and criticisms! 6th installment on the way