by freejack
Had me from beginning to the last line....A truly erotic storie and well worth reading
I wish I had the imagination to write stories like this. This had me so turned on, and ready to come in my shorts. Keep up the good work.
That was a hell of a story. I want to read more. I would have loved to eat Cassie's filthy asshole and pussy after she got back from the gym. Spreading her asscheeks wide as I sniffed her gamey and sweaty bunghole. I would lick and suck her pungent hole until the flavor was gone as I tongue fucked her tight ring.
First time leaving feedback. This story was well worded and kept the reader wanting to get to the next sentence! I have read very good writers on this site and others, and you are one of the best; right there with 'Dancing Doll', 'Damon X' and 'Silkstockinglover'...great job! (Same compliment goes to the sequel - "Cassie Falls")
I'm so sad you've stopped writing.
It's very rare to meet qulified writers like you.
Saroig
rgpo49@yahoo.com
that was the best story , but id love to have seen more of a fight lol , but great job !!!!!
This may be the sexiest sentences ever written...
‘She rubbed my saliva-covered shaft around her lips and cheeks, and looked up at me, purring, "You know where your girlfriend's tongue is?" I guessed in her slit. "It's about two inches up my ass."’