by freejack
This may be the sexiest sentences ever written...
‘She rubbed my saliva-covered shaft around her lips and cheeks, and looked up at me, purring, "You know where your girlfriend's tongue is?" I guessed in her slit. "It's about two inches up my ass."’
that was the best story , but id love to have seen more of a fight lol , but great job !!!!!
I'm so sad you've stopped writing.
It's very rare to meet qulified writers like you.
Saroig
rgpo49@yahoo.com
First time leaving feedback. This story was well worded and kept the reader wanting to get to the next sentence! I have read very good writers on this site and others, and you are one of the best; right there with 'Dancing Doll', 'Damon X' and 'Silkstockinglover'...great job! (Same compliment goes to the sequel - "Cassie Falls")
That was a hell of a story. I want to read more. I would have loved to eat Cassie's filthy asshole and pussy after she got back from the gym. Spreading her asscheeks wide as I sniffed her gamey and sweaty bunghole. I would lick and suck her pungent hole until the flavor was gone as I tongue fucked her tight ring.
I wish I had the imagination to write stories like this. This had me so turned on, and ready to come in my shorts. Keep up the good work.
Had me from beginning to the last line....A truly erotic storie and well worth reading