by shakna
Someone's on a creative roll right now. Four stories posted at once. Well done.
Feels like you sacrificed details in order to meet the word limit. I couldn't get into it.
Good imagery. But it doesn't seem to be complete, ending in the sex scene. It's as if you had a longer story which put the words "fresh baked" in a different context, then shortened the story for the 750-word limit.
If you're looking for something a little bit more, along the same lines, you might also try my "Dragon's Kitty".
Don't know how to rate this type of story as only read a few based on how I feel that day. So average