All Comments on 'Catgirl Cafe'

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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 2 years ago

Someone's on a creative roll right now. Four stories posted at once. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Feels like you sacrificed details in order to meet the word limit. I couldn't get into it.

Lifestyle66Lifestyle66over 2 years ago

Good imagery. But it doesn't seem to be complete, ending in the sex scene. It's as if you had a longer story which put the words "fresh baked" in a different context, then shortened the story for the 750-word limit.

dwoelfledwoelfleover 2 years ago

Part of a fun collection of quickies. Really good.

shaknashaknaover 2 years agoAuthor

If you're looking for something a little bit more, along the same lines, you might also try my "Dragon's Kitty".

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

Another good short shot .I love your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't know how to rate this type of story as only read a few based on how I feel that day. So average

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