All Comments on 'Cats Prey on Birds'

I enjoyed this story... Had comic books been anything like this when I read them, a lot less homework would’ve gotten done!

Some more details about Selina’s body, through Tim’s eyes, would have taken this closer to the edge... For instance, a description of her nipples, size of her breasts, was her pussy neatly trimmed or shaved smooth, etc... and possibly vice-versa as well; letting the reader into the characters’ minds and letting them “hear” observational thoughts about each other and how it turned them on...

Anyhow, I think this is a great way to rewrite comic book story lines. Nice job, but don’t be afraid to make these story lines saucier and more descript.