All Comments on 'Caught Again Has Its Benefits'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
very hot

Hot scenario - a little different with the toy - and good descriptions. You seemed to mix up names a couple of times, which kind of broke the flow. Be more careful please, but WRITE MORE!

klippertklippertabout 13 years ago
hehehe

you Just knew that bag had other tricks in it......

klippertklippertabout 13 years ago

you Just knew that bag had other tricks in it......

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Nice beginning, but we need few more chapters to fill the story out.

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