All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 01'

Trashy white women obsessed with black dicks of negro yard apes. So what? How can such a story be anything more than the pathetic account of a sick female slut conditioned to be a blak dick zombie by the media. To hell with her and all like her. Reading stories by creeps like this marks the reader as only partly sub human.

That would never happen. Keep writing. Try a differnt theme maybe.

I liked the story, didn't think it was very well written though. Keep going, I would read chapter two, but work on your descriptive writing.