All Comments on 'Caught! Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, nothing erotic here. Some mild talk/thoughts about the new trainer and that's it. Please make the chapters a bit longer and let's read about what is going on with Jon at work. He should be monitoring her at her home. They are not living together but he stayed overnight for two nights. Will he set up cameras in her house? Will Castle and Vanessa become an item? Will Castle tell Jon what is going on with Vanessa? Will Jon become more dominate and show off Vanessa around town? This story would still fit with Loving Wives or Romance.

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