by pnw_writer_85
Very good story to young men discover each other’s needs and wants. I thought it was written nicely please continue
Hottest thing I've read on here for a while! I sure hope we can get another chapter or two! I enjoyed the no nonsense hot chemistry, and the way they devoured each other! Just smoking hot man sex!
Just a great job. You write beautifully. So easy and smooth. Awesome work!!! Keep writing
Wow! Please keep writing stories. This is the hottest one I’ve read in awhile!
Great story, even got an old guy like me excited.. Can't wait to more from you.
Great story, well written and very hot. Nothing like two masculine young men exploring their bodies and sex together. reader777
Thanks, everyone, for the feedback and warm responses. I wasn't planning to make this a series, but you never know what the future holds. I've got two other stories that I hope to put to paper soon. Thanks!
This was the best story I’ve ever heard. It covered all my bases. Love kissing sucking and fucking and loads of romance. I’m looking forvavfriendvtonshsteb5hodr moments with. I live in South Florida but I can’t find a friend that fits my fantasy! ampmiami1@gmail.com
Damn, I love first-time stories. And this is a good one, well written and described. Thanks!
Really hot, man! Well paced. I, too, would love a second (and third, and fourth) installment when you find the inspiration.
Amazing story! Hot action conveyed with great writing describing physical sensations in vivid detail while leaving the visuals more to the imagination. I read this on my phone at work. Now there’s a small wet spot by my fly thanks to all the precum leaked by my throbbing cock!
Hotter than hot! Both were into the sex and enjoyed each other tremendously! The action and writing were excellent. Loved it!
You are an incredible writer! Your characters feel very vivid and realistic and then of course you describe the sex in a powerful, erotic way. Please keep writing!
I love them, and Cedar is such a hot name haha! Really great writing. Felt it all.