All Comments on 'Cedar'

by pnw_writer_85

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 3 years ago

Very hot & sexy. Is it possible to make the next episode even hotter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Holy shit… this was so great…

Reggie2xxReggie2xxalmost 3 years ago

Very good story to young men discover each other’s needs and wants. I thought it was written nicely please continue

JRSONJRSONalmost 3 years ago

Hottest thing I've read on here for a while! I sure hope we can get another chapter or two! I enjoyed the no nonsense hot chemistry, and the way they devoured each other! Just smoking hot man sex!

WisheswerehorsesWisheswerehorsesalmost 3 years ago

Just a great job. You write beautifully. So easy and smooth. Awesome work!!! Keep writing

RobJasperRobJasperalmost 3 years ago

Amazingly hot steamy wonderful story! Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow! Please keep writing stories. This is the hottest one I’ve read in awhile!

bushman123bushman123over 2 years ago

Great story, even got an old guy like me excited.. Can't wait to more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, well written and very hot. Nothing like two masculine young men exploring their bodies and sex together. reader777

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Beautifully written and very hot. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 stars!

pnw_writer_85pnw_writer_85over 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks, everyone, for the feedback and warm responses. I wasn't planning to make this a series, but you never know what the future holds. I've got two other stories that I hope to put to paper soon. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was the best story I’ve ever heard. It covered all my bases. Love kissing sucking and fucking and loads of romance. I’m looking forvavfriendvtonshsteb5hodr moments with. I live in South Florida but I can’t find a friend that fits my fantasy! ampmiami1@gmail.com

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 2 years ago

Damn, I love first-time stories. And this is a good one, well written and described. Thanks!

furluvrcafurluvrcaover 2 years ago

Really hot, man! Well paced. I, too, would love a second (and third, and fourth) installment when you find the inspiration.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you. I Really, Really liked this story. Please keep writing.

HairyJacquesHairyJacquesabout 2 years ago

Amazing story! Hot action conveyed with great writing describing physical sensations in vivid detail while leaving the visuals more to the imagination. I read this on my phone at work. Now there’s a small wet spot by my fly thanks to all the precum leaked by my throbbing cock!

Hutchison12Hutchison12over 1 year ago

Fantastic loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hotter than hot! Both were into the sex and enjoyed each other tremendously! The action and writing were excellent. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You are an incredible writer! Your characters feel very vivid and realistic and then of course you describe the sex in a powerful, erotic way. Please keep writing!

adidas21525adidas215259 months ago

I love them, and Cedar is such a hot name haha! Really great writing. Felt it all.

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