All Comments on 'Cemetery Summons Ch. 08'

And so another long, painful wait begins.... until the next riveting chapter is approved and published. Well done.

I love the story so far too bad we have to wait for the next chapter but it is worth the wait.

"Incomplete boy."

That just made me giggle after a wonderfully written story.

What's wrong with you, that you'd write your protagonist to be so very pathetic? Jesus, nobody likes a Mary Jane, but you've not had him grow and gain strength, at all... You just keep him a sad little victim... What's that say about your fantasies?